tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post2840277427340281922..comments2013-06-17T21:16:21.456+05:30Comments on Naalu Vishayam...: முதல் வரி..Balajihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-60110436697659722552012-10-28T16:49:32.398+05:302012-10-28T16:49:32.398+05:30NICE BALA BUT LIKE THAT OF U R CINEMANICE BALA BUT LIKE THAT OF U R CINEMAsampathgopihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12454091661739285687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-42672280478499105772012-10-28T01:34:01.406+05:302012-10-28T01:34:01.406+05:30nice one machinice one machikarthik rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14410990290421811378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-74053946171023647052009-12-23T23:31:32.520+05:302009-12-23T23:31:32.520+05:30machi ... mudhal variyila aarambichurukken ... nic...machi ... mudhal variyila aarambichurukken ... nice one ... :)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15080964398821703437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-55535938681654963562009-12-21T12:06:25.203+05:302009-12-21T12:06:25.203+05:30yep nice story man...good thats good to read ....I...yep nice story man...good thats good to read ....In first story itself u r not killing ur story characters also viewer too by ur stuff... continue..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10956299039202570210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-25555545608230767142009-11-27T11:01:31.791+05:302009-11-27T11:01:31.791+05:30hi da u r story is good it is a good starting plea...hi da u r story is good it is a good starting please continue, sorry for the delay today only i saw the story it was nicesampathgopihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12454091661739285687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-77502731820447325252009-11-27T10:28:25.498+05:302009-11-27T10:28:25.498+05:30Thanks Vignesh.. Waiting for Chance :)Thanks Vignesh.. Waiting for Chance :)Balajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-29747387867695664202009-11-27T00:23:45.594+05:302009-11-27T00:23:45.594+05:30fantastic creativity.. my applause to u...
I found...fantastic creativity.. my applause to u...<br />I found something strange after the hospital scene i feel that u could ve avoided that line "oh! i didnt tell u"<br /><br />in future i can produce a movie by making u guys to direct ...... :)vignesh venkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15437436638646187035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-85214052228128300042009-11-24T23:57:45.368+05:302009-11-24T23:57:45.368+05:30fine looks good.fine looks good.Hari Moorthyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170437586219442400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-57418921526392111622009-11-23T12:09:01.848+05:302009-11-23T12:09:01.848+05:30New addition - First she was kidding him as "...New addition - First she was kidding him as "New addition". But when she came to know that she's wrong, she asked her going-to-be-lover what his name was. This time he was kidding like "New addition?". I suppose this ought to be clear. Wht say Hari?Balajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-50926114207258123162009-11-22T21:15:43.865+05:302009-11-22T21:15:43.865+05:30Thanks Sud.. Thats my bro's idea.. Thanks Hari...Thanks Sud.. Thats my bro's idea.. Thanks Hari..Balajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-47033795613933844672009-11-22T20:25:42.564+05:302009-11-22T20:25:42.564+05:30kathai title change pannathu romba super da..kathai title change pannathu romba super da..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10276446888135298416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-57540226147713797962009-11-22T18:00:23.382+05:302009-11-22T18:00:23.382+05:30Thanks Bharathy (pasu) .. Nice to know that you re...Thanks Bharathy (pasu) .. Nice to know that you read my blog..Balajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-89255515887262289062009-11-22T16:27:23.640+05:302009-11-22T16:27:23.640+05:30nice one da!nice one da!Pasuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07221063368814434230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-29242643086997387922009-11-21T22:47:31.661+05:302009-11-21T22:47:31.661+05:30Great start!
enaku thonra sila vishayangala solir...Great start!<br /><br />enaku thonra sila vishayangala solirukan keela:<br /><br />- amazing ending!<br />- 'iniku lawerence sir pudusha'after that dialogue there should me minimum two lines which should not relate the above conversaion. (i mean lawerence) Otherwise, everyone will guess 'she wrongly going to involve him...'<br />- you are saying the lady is in the final year. There is no more details about her character ??? so the below conversation is not make sense 'shut up come with me' <br />- Also, no training lady will say 'shut up' to a guy who is in her rank... maybe lover will accept it :-)<br />- 'new addition' this line is not clear ?<br />- Please minimize the story to one page or make the story little bit bigger. <br /><br />Tell u more comments, if you call me without angry :)<br /><br />Would you know or not - major rock is you started the story near from the ending ! -- thats one of the key common style of all the great writers!Hari Moorthyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11170437586219442400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-45330322145663252582009-11-21T19:58:48.113+05:302009-11-21T19:58:48.113+05:30Thanks sir.. Unlike others just visiting and leavi...Thanks sir.. Unlike others just visiting and leaving, nice to see you commenting.. Way to go..Balajihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987808833836140369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3732785391281075228.post-31431791917560625402009-11-21T19:50:15.956+05:302009-11-21T19:50:15.956+05:30good ending da mapla.. u have a good future.. en m...good ending da mapla.. u have a good future.. en mooche ninurichu.. a common term.. well used..Sudharsana Raamanujan.Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14750132091376849546noreply@blogger.com